I love these two pages! First of all, Lightning Bug looks pretty funny in his tench coat and hat, plus there is shading, Zach actually is not drawn poorly, (even though I forgot his glasses and had to draw them in later), and I like how Lightning Bug is talking to himself, pretending to be Sam Smith! :D
Anyway, I love a lot of things about these two pages. Oh yes, and, it's time for...
We have a pretty awesome plot! I hope I'll stay more on track with the plot, since last time some stuff was supposed to happen that didn't. I changed the plot a little to compensate, by the way, and I'll be putting it in the Slideshow soon. That is all for today!